$string['sent'] = '...finished';
$string['siteadmin'] = 'Administrator';
$string['siteadmin_help'] = 'The full name of the site administrator.';
-$string['sitecommnews'] = 'Updates about Moodle news and features';
-$string['sitecommnews_help'] = 'You have the option of subscribing to our low volume email list including a newsletter about happenings in the Moodle community. ';
-$string['sitecommnewsno'] = 'No, I do not want to receive any email from Moodle HQ';
-$string['sitecommnewsyes'] = 'Yes please, include me in Moodle’s regular e-newsletter updates';
+$string['sitecommnews'] = 'Moodle newsletter';
+$string['sitecommnews_help'] = 'You have the option of subscribing to our Moodle newsletter. You may unsubscribe at any time.';
+$string['sitecommnewsno'] = 'No, I do not wish to receive any emails';
+$string['sitecommnewsyes'] = 'Yes, I would like to receive the Moodle newsletter';
$string['sitecountry'] = 'Country';
$string['sitecountry_help'] = 'The country your organisation or institution is located in.';
$string['sitedesc'] = 'Description';
$string['siteprivacylinked'] = 'Display my site name with the link';
$string['siteregistrationcontact'] = 'Display contact form';
$string['siteregistrationcontact_help'] = 'If you allow it, other people in our Moodle community (who need a login account) can contact you via a form on our Moodle community site. However, they will never be able to see your email address.';
-$string['siteregistrationemail'] = 'Notifications about important security and technical issues.';
-$string['siteregistrationemail_help'] = 'You have the option of subscribing to our low volume email list for important news (on security issues or new releases).';
+$string['siteregistrationemail'] = 'Notifications of new Moodle releases, security alerts and other important news';
+$string['siteregistrationemail_help'] = 'You have the option of subscribing to our low-volume mailing list for notifications of new Moodle releases, security alerts and other important news. You may unsubscribe at any time.';
$string['siteregistrationupdated'] = 'Site registration updated';
$string['siterelease'] = 'Moodle release';
$string['sitereleasenum'] = 'Moodle release ({$a})';